Adding Detail to Sentences

A genius invented the spaceship with his assistant .
This person worked hard for a whole week to invent this spaceship with lots of tools.
He collected lots of material to invent his spaceship called room 13 kings.

This story shows you that I am learning how to add detail to sentences.

ALBANY north shore tornado

Yesterday afternoon there was an adverse weather event in Albany North shore. It has damaged buildings and houses. A tornado is a terrfying event with strong winds that can pick up buildings also destroy cars, house or even large companies. About ten people ended up in hospital and one person had died. Most people are fine so that’s good news.