Tuesday, March 5, 2013

The Mysterious Apple: Edited and Completed!

On a hot summers day, Delilah spent the hours playing in her backyard! “ Time to come inside Delilah” Her mom shouted. “Just a minute!” Delilah said as she grabbed on to the neighbours branch that was poking out onto their fence. Suddenly she spotted a shiny red apple hanging. She grabbed it and investigated its core.  She took a bite and spat it back out. “GROSS, YUCK“ she thought. It tasted like mud mixed with cinnamon!

Unexpectedly  the tree had mysteriously disappeared! Delilah couldn’t believe what she saw. She dashed into the house... but it was too late her family had disappeared too. As she got to her room her bed had been gone, also everything else!

Delilah stood in crazy silence. She couldn’t blink at all. ‘’ ANYBODY!” She shouted. Delilah was lonely she had tears streaming down her face. “Help please” She said. Delilah had tried to find out ‘why did everything go?’ she thought. “THE APPLE”

Delilah couldn’t help herself . but take one more bite of the apple! She sprinted to the apple and paused and thought of how ‘gross’ it’ll be. But thinking of her family made her! Delilah took a very large bite and chewed and chewed. Finally she swallowed it. Delilah closed her eyes for 5 seconds. She smoothly opened it her eyes and ‘luckily’ everything was back. “Time to come inside” her mom said. “I’m coming!” she replied with a grin. Delilah had spent the year ‘not’ eating any more apples!

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