Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Mars Bars!


Mars Bars

By Norman Billbrough




Main Characters:
Mars Bar who is the new student that turns out to be a robot. Albert  who doesn’t get use to Mars Bars body features!


Setting:
Inside class, @ the park, @ the storage room, @ school


Orientation:
Mrs Jane introduced a new student in class, his name was ‘Mars Bars’! He sat next to Albert’s Desk.  Albert found him very funny looking. , He had a nose hose pipe and eyes so wide , they could reach his ears. Why are you wearing a hat @ school Albert asked. “to keep my head warm” Mars replied. “Albert save your talk till play time!” Mrs Jane interuppted. “ We are now do ving our spelling test”                                            


Problem:
Albert saw that Mars was copying his spelling. @ Play time he grabbed mars arm and felt a heat burning up on his hand, it felt like a sizzling bar.” Ouch” he said. “Why did you copy my spelling in class?” Albert asked. “I  covered it all up that NOBODY could see it , how could you see it?”. Albert said. “I can see EVERYTHING he said.”  

Action:
Albert had no lunch so he had to share with mars. He wasn’t quite agreeing with that. One time he raced all around school searching for mars , he couldn’t find him. Then he found him in the storage room with something wierd plugged to his head! He couldn’t believe it. !

Outcome:
Then after school, Albert didn’t get the chance to say goodbye! Instead Mars ran to a weird looking vehicle! “Where are you going?” Albert shouted. “I’m late I need to go to the ships” Mars replied. “What ships?” Albert asked. Mars didn’t reply. Th
en Albert saw a thin pink arm coming out of the vehicle and he saw it wave. It made Alberts day!  

My literacy class have been focusing on reading logs. 

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